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Thursday, 10 September 2020

Hero and Villain Writing

Kia Ora everyone,

Today I will be sharing about what we have been doing during writing. It's the last week of this hurumanu, so we have to rush and finish our writing. 

In the past few weeks, we have been focusing on making a story. A story that has a hero and villain, we can also include a protagonist.  

My story is about a normal girl who has a guy-friend that isn't normal. He has a power, they went into a school trip in the forest. But a girl seems to ruin their friendship. We must write the full story. I mean, writing a full story is hard, specially when you don't have that much time left to finish your story, but in the end it's worth it tho. You get to read your story, what you have done. It took a long time to finish my story, I always had to re-read it back from the top to make sure my writing make sense, it has the punctuation that I need, and to make sure that I use describing words.

Anyway, after writing a story, we have to drawing a setting. A setting in our story is a place. A place for our character, just like in a movie, usually in movies, their settings are in the forest if it's creepy, cities if it's action, and more. Then we have to draw their appearance, appearance for our character. The shape of their faces, their eyes, their eyebrows, their mouths, their hairs and more. We watched a video to get more ideas about our characters. 

My story isn't perfect but I still managed to finish it. But anyway, here is my story: Link

Here are my drawings for the setting and the characters appearance:

Setting:


Characters:




Writing this story was fun because I wrote it on my own, it's from Imagination, and it makes the story more interesting. I also enjoyed drawing this settings and characters because I get to learn more things about drawing, just like a perspective drawings. 


Thank you for reading my blog. I hope you enjoy, that's all for today, bai.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jhrnylle,

    I love your story about the normal girl and guy friend who has powers and your drawings are really good.

    You have a really creative mind and I hope you keep on drawing when your older...

    Looking forward to your reply!
    - Susie

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    1. Hi Susie,

      I'm glad that you liked the story and the drawing. I tried to make the drawing more describable so the readers can get the picture in their mind.

      How old do you think the characters are?

      Have a great day :)

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