Pobble

Good morning/afternoon everyone,

 

One of the work we did was pobble. There's a picture that we have to make a story about, but they've already made a story starter, what we have to do is to finish the story. I tried to make the reader curious as possible. I wasn't able to actually add more writings because I'm running out of ideas. In the picture, there is a Crow (bird) with a necklace key on the crow's beak, while standing on the top of a clock. It looks like this: 

This is the story starter: 

 Story starter!

She had been chasing it all day. Now, the crow had it.

Time was ticking. Time was running out. She tiptoed towards the creature, seeing the precious key it held precariously in its sharp, cruel beak. It let out an irritating, throaty cackle, its soot-black wings ruffling gently as it manoeuvred itself on top of the clock; it was ready to take flight.

Knowing she might only have a few seconds before her opportunity disappeared, she took another cautious step forward. Time seemed to slow, her body tingled in excitement and her heart thudded in her chest. It was now or never…

Can you continue the story?

She slowly and quietly attempted to snatch the key sneakingly, but immediately failed. The crow glared at her, as she felt shivering down her spine. 

The crow POV (point of view): 

I have taken the key, she was so desperate and I like seeing her suffer. 

Backstory: She used to hunt birds, and she accidentally killed my sister, I wanted to take revenge. I am not just a normal crow, I am one of those powerful and mysterious beings. I cursed her for 1 year. I let her have exactly 1 year to be able to find the partner of the key she had around her neck. She looked tired, and wasn’t able to concentrate. But she took a stick she found on the ground, she was about to hit me- AAHHH! I rushly took action to avoid getting hit by that stick, I flew up and went above the trees. The necklace- the necklace is gone! I looked down, it’s on her hand. Ugh, I’ll be back to take revenge, again. 

The girl POV (point of view):

I’m shivering, I need to take the key back immediately. I checked my watch on my wrist, ‘No!’ I shouted, 50 minutes- 50 more minutes till I- I- I disappear. I titled my head at the crow, my life depends on this key, I have to get it as soon as possible. I took time to think for a minute. I wouldn’t want to keep on chasing the crow. I titled my head towards the crow, I frowned thinking I wouldn’t be able to get it and would disappear while looking down at the ground. I suddenly saw a stick, a long thick stick. An Idea popped up on my head. I rushily grabbed the stick and was about to carefully hit the necklace so it would fall without hitting the crow. I took my shot, and it was an unexpected success. The crow went across above my head, heading towards the tree next to me, leaving the necklace on the rusty floor next to the clock. I heavily sighed and a smile creeped onto my face. I ran towards the necklace, and slowly held it to my hands, ‘Finally!’, I was extremely enthusiastic. I connected the key to my necklace hanging on my neck. ‘Acckk!’-

To be continued. 

Thank you for reading my blog. That was just a short story that I made, and that's all for now. I'll be posting regularly whenever I finish my works, bye.